Flashes of brighter light jumped like brilliant lightning bolts from the ceiling to the floor and then the column of fire materialised.
As the incantation continued and the light and sound grew, Margaret felt strength flow into her body and muscles.
The pillar of light moved slowly across the room, gradually engulfing the poltergeists. The fire ran up their forms. Their faces became more and more anguished, a substance like blood poured from their ears and eyes. The sound reached a crescendo and each of them opened their mouths and screamed. The flames entered their gaping maws and were drawn down into their lungs. The pillar of flame continued to move and gradually crossed the floor and passed through the wall on the opposite side of the cellar. The ghosts stood where the column of fire had just been.
As Margaret watched a strange transformation took place in front of her amazed eyes. The ghosts started to diminish and shrink. Their faces became thin and gaunt and their bodies slowly shrivelled up, becoming smaller and smaller as she watched. Within moments the forms of the ghosts had collapsed in on themselves and all that remained were piles of smoking ashes.
An incantation
Performed with evil intent
Could cause vindictive
ghosts to materialise
With a disruptive purpose
This haibun was written for Colleen Chesebro’s weekly poetry challenge. You can join in the fun here:Β https://colleenchesebro.com/2018/10/23/colleens-weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-no-107-haunt-spell-synonymsonly/
Nicely done! My fave line is ” . . . a substance like blood poured from their ears and eyes.” I”m imagining black, spectral liquid, ew.:-)
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Thank you, Priscilla
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Wonderful haunting imagery!! π»π
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Thank you, Nicole.
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Spooky! Enjoyed this, Robbie π
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Wow, Robbie, this is a fabulous Haibun/Tanka! You really nailed the spooky Halloween quality I’ve been looking for. I love it! β€
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Thank you, Colleen, that makes me so happy.
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Glad to hear. Well deserved, Robbie. β€
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Perfect Robbie!!!
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Thank you, Ritu.
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Evocative and spooky. Do you have a loving incantation I can do now? π
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Thanks Brad, loving seems to be a bit out of my scope right now. Maybe after Halloween.
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Thank you, Brad. Loving seems to be right out of my scope at the moment … after Halloween maybe!
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Darn. Happy Haunting Robbie!
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The fire images are just right to illuminate the words. (K)
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Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it.
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What vivid descriptions, Robbie. I got chills! Brilliant Haibun! I was glued to the screen the entire time. Very well done!π¬
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Thank you, Vashti. I am delighted you enjoyed this.
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Spookily perfect π
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Thank you, Willow
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Pleasure π
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