#Flashfiction – Poisoned apple

Fear had eaten into his mind’s core like a malevolent caterpillar. Fear of the future. Fear of the soldiers. Fear of losing his farm. It had been there, rotting his brain matter, ever since the declaration of war in October the prior year. The injury he had sustained early this year had exacerbated its effect until it felt as if his mind was like a worm-infested apple, brown and soft inside. He took some deep breaths, determined to prevent the poison from spreading and affecting his reactions. Poor reactions could result in the deaths of him and his family.

The extract from my WIP, A Ghost and his Gold is posted for Charli Mills’ weekly 99-word flash fiction challenge. You can join in here: https://carrotranch.com/2019/08/08/august-8-flash-fiction-challenge/

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39 thoughts on “#Flashfiction – Poisoned apple

  1. Wow, a powerfully evocative flash, Robbie. This descriptor is great: “…as if his mind was like a worm-infested apple, brown and soft inside.” It also gets at the core of where much of our fear language (and actions) originate.

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