“Mrs van Tonder, her snow white hair and deeply lined face defying her indefatigable spirit and faith in God helps Marta to obtain a couple of extra British military blankets from the supplies tent to supplement the blankets they have brought with them. The blankets are old and thin and the two women and four children, as well as Ardrina and Dorthea, will have to share them but her success in wrangling them from the camp staff, with the help of Mrs van Tonder, feels like a small victory.
Marta quickly realises that Mrs van Tonder, or Ouma Lettie, is wily and has already learned how to manipulate the system, whenever possible, to her own advantage.
“I have been on God’s earth for over seventy years and I have learned to always ask for things, rather than suffer in silence. God helps those who help themselves,” she smiles conspiratorially.
“I was living in a women’s laager with my husband, Sarel, before it was attacked by the Khakis. Sarel was one of twenty men living in the laager. They were all too old to go on commando and had been appointed to help protect us.
“We were travelling with thirty wagons and carts and two hundred cattle and had been living on the veld for seven months before the attack by the British soldiers that landed me here. Various Boer commandos had been providing us with weapons, tents, food and clothing.
“About a month ago, a convoy of Khakis came across our laager and attacked it. They burned all the wagons, food and tents and we were forced to watch.”
A distant look comes into the older woman’s eyes as she remembers that day. “The soldiers set fire to the wagons first.” She describes how the yellow and orange flames had spread out delicately, tasting the dry tinder of the frames, and how the bright sparks had flown upwards, fanned by puffs of the bitter wind, and settled on the canvas wagon covers which instantly burst into flames. As the wagons and tents burned, black smoke had billowed into the bright blue sky, rising upwards to a tremendous height where it was whipped to shreds by the wind.
“What happened next?” asks Marta, forcing Mrs van Tonder to return her wandering mind to the present. “When they considered the destruction to be sufficiently complete, they marched our elderly guards, and the few boys of twelve years and older, away as prisoners of war. The women and the rest of the children were brought here.”
“Were you scared?” Marta asks.
“No,” Mrs van Tonder’s lips forms a thin, straight line and she pushes back her shoulders as if in defiance. “The Lord has always preserved me until now and He will continue to do so.””
This is an extract from my new WIP about the Second Anglo Boer war, it will be a supernatural historical novel. It is currently nameless as I am not sure with my current re-write if A Ghost and his Gold will continue to work.
This is posted for Sue Vincent’s weekly photo prompt which you can join in here: https://scvincent.com/2019/10/24/thursday-photo-prompt-balefire-writephoto/
This is a great piece of work Robbie, it fits the prompt perfectly. I have really enjoyed every part of this WIP that you have shared…war and the way humans treat humans is so awful. It’s has always been so is and also sadly ever will be. 💜💜💜
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I often wonder, Willow, why it is that men in power seem to turn to abuse of others. It is unnecessary as they are already in charge. I just can’t understand how anyone can feel pleasure from watching suffering.
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Not can Robbie, sadly I think it is just human Nature 💜
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I am glad to see this piece, Robbie. All natons like to believe themselves blameless…but few of them have histories that uphold that illusion.
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I am also writing the English perspective into this book, Sue. There was blame and bad decision making on both sides.
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There always is… we are not always a good species.
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No worse than many other nations, Sue.
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I was speaking of the human race.
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Well, you are right about that.
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A very good read. I enjoyed that.
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Thanks Danny, I am really into writing this story.
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You were born to be a story teller!
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Thank you, Annette
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Survival skills come in many forms. A strong spirit seems essential. (K)
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You are right, Kerfe, survival skills so seem to boil down to a strong determination to survive.
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Terrific excerpt Robbie…looking forward to the book!
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Thanks John, This one is only for next year August.
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A perfect snippet for the prompt, Robbie. Your glimpses into the war are evocative of stories told by my grandmother about WWII. They feel very real. Well done.
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Thank you, Diana. War is very heart rending.
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I really liked this, Robbie. Especially the descriptions. They were intense!
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Thank you, Mae. I am trying to keep the pace up.
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An extraordinary passage, Robbie. Good luck. 👍 Hugs on the wing! 🎃
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I’m glad you enjoyed this, Teagan. Have a great week.
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Fascinating piece Robbie 👍
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Thank you, Jessica.
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great write … I never understand how we can be so cruel to each other … some councils dump the homeless peoples few items “to clean up the city”!
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How awful, although it also happens here from time to time.
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I was picturing them burn the wagons and losing everything. I want to know more.
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This was a very sad war, Denise, but I suppose all war is tragic.
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“tasting the dry tinder of the frames” – Nicely told.
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Thank you, Ken.
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